BenwaHakubi's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Brennan's World Story]

Cool animation!

I loved the animation and voices. It was great! Especially the explosions and fight moves. It seemed alot like sonic the hedgehog. As much as I liked it (and sonic) I think that you should be more creative and make your own fight moves/ideas.

[Hitokiri: act 3]

Nice

The intro was too long. I almost lost interest. The sound is too quiet I have to crank my speakers to the max to hear anything. The action was great though.Nice job with the graphics, Not many people can get away with doing a black and white scene without it looking cheesy. Also it could have been bloodier, after all Hitokiri does mean "Man slayer".

w-style responds:

Yeah I think you are absolutely right! I will pay atention to these things in the future. Note that I made the intro like a year ago so I have made change since then (Strings~* has like no intro at all I think, jump right into the movie:P)

Thanks for you comment:)

[littleFoot]

Wow, better art than disney!

The art is so well done! It's better than disney's artwork! I was surprised something with no hentai actually made it so high in the portal. The characters were really well done, you can see what is going on with them with their expressions and music. well done.

[EVA5 The Rei Puppet Show]

That was...odd.

I don't think it was that good to be honsest. The art was ok but it was the same animations over and over to weird al. You could have done better with your own fun ideas than some music and looped animation. I'm not trying to sound like I'm harping, I just want to help your flash be better.

[Mountain Dew Music Video]

Ooo! Caffeine!

the sound was nice and clear. The animation was so-so, I'm not a fan of sticks. There is a white line along the edge along the side of the screen that doesn't go there. I liked the backround it was very cheery and bright!

[The Quad Massacre 3]

Has potential.

The animation was great yet, art of the people looks like it was done in MS paint, you really need to refine it. The people's voices hurt my ears especally the black guy with the high pitched voice. The humor was didn't make any sense it reminds me of the sponge bob episode I was forced to watch buy my cousin. You are on the right track and have lots of foom for improvement!

darkwolf7676 responds:

they were actually drawn in ms paint by my friend, then i traced them into flash, so your a smart man

[Flight of the Bumble Bee]

Meh

0 on sound since the music was annoying. It didn't fit the story at all and was like a mix of country and soft rock. The graphics were very cute but the story was short and rather dull.

kitty-and-meander responds:

Hey, you liked the graphics so you've satisfied me. Thats all I was working on here, graphics. Not really story or anything. And anyway, Flowers on the Wall is a great song, hit the bong and then you'll like it!

[The Columbine Kid]

Didn't like it

I watched this one mainly out of curiosity. I admit the art was bad but, I understand the reason this was made. It wasn't the fact that the columbine murderers were violent video game players, it was that they were bullied. If you did a total revamp of this with better art, music and mabey a voice of the kid saying this is what I had to endure....

[Clockwork Heart]

Manson RULES!

Needs a play button. The animation was quick and smooth. Verry fitting to the music as the industral feel of the robots compliments the Manson. The drawings were great but you need a tad more practice if you want to be truly great. The animation is weird (In a good way) It fits the music very well nice work!

Slash-Beetlejuice responds:

Yea MANSON RULES!
btw, there was a play button. It was the lever that comes down when the loading is done.

[DevilSlayer III]

Too short!

The text on the first screen needs to be bigger. I cannot read it and I do not even need glasses. The blood needs to be darker and redder. The music gave it a spiritual relaxed feel. The characters look white in this one. The one main problem was it was wayyy too short. I know you said it will be awhile before you relese the next one make it longer than this please!

JazLyte responds:

Hey, I got a life outside of flash cartooning, and with this being my last year and 1/2 of high school, I really gotta bust my butt on other things, so just bear with me, aight?