I think this is a pretty solid start. It's a simple animation but it's got good composition and sound. I think it could be improved by adding more color and making it tell more of a short story. I'm sure you could fill a few minutes if you pushed the shape shifting aspect a little more. Just some ideas.
Thanks for the review! I agree...I think if aspects of the drawing continued morphing into other shapes it could really go somewhere. To be honest, I actually ran out of ideas. I guess this is where storyboarding comes in, huh?
As for color, my eye is always drawn to monochromatic designs (as evidenced by both my avatar and various websites). I think jumping into actually using colors is something I should look into, but would need to actually read a bit about color theory first. It's another thing to look into!
Its simple, well drawn and funny. I like it.
Its not ready for newgrounds. I think if you added a full fight scene and mabey some dialogue so we know why these dudes are fighting you could make something pretty interesting.
i am planning that, and i dont know english so i dont think i dialogue will be a good i dea.. (when i say dont know english i mean its not my language so i my english is pretty lacking)
This was a pleasant surprise. It actually made me laugh. I hope this is or becomes a series of making fun of PSA's. I think that is had a bit of a slow start but after that it got funny. I think the voice acting really made it a hit though.
I had a similar reaction. Tumblr was great for the first few weeks then seeing the same old recycled shit and psychotic social justice people make my head explode.
I like. Plenty of action, violence and 80's rock. Lets see where this series goes. I think a good track for this series would be Wanted Man by Ratt.
While this is really cute and well drawn I'm going to say that this is not ready for newgrounds. I heard no sound and I didn't see much of a plot or joke. I hope to see an improvement soon.
Haha everyone with a cock can relate to this XD
I'm not a very big fan of stick fights but I gotta hand it to you. This was well choreographed and the end was funny.
Its pretty funny. It is kinda annoying as a loop. I think what might make it better is to find other random lines and make the buttons functional so that the viewer can click them and hear different lines.
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