BenwaHakubi's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Windy]

I think this is a pretty solid start. It's a simple animation but it's got good composition and sound. I think it could be improved by adding more color and making it tell more of a short story. I'm sure you could fill a few minutes if you pushed the shape shifting aspect a little more. Just some ideas.

sleepFacingWest responds:

Thanks for the review! I agree...I think if aspects of the drawing continued morphing into other shapes it could really go somewhere. To be honest, I actually ran out of ideas. I guess this is where storyboarding comes in, huh?

As for color, my eye is always drawn to monochromatic designs (as evidenced by both my avatar and various websites). I think jumping into actually using colors is something I should look into, but would need to actually read a bit about color theory first. It's another thing to look into!

[Snail quest: The buritto]

Its simple, well drawn and funny. I like it.

[First animation - Punch]

Its not ready for newgrounds. I think if you added a full fight scene and mabey some dialogue so we know why these dudes are fighting you could make something pretty interesting.

DeXeS responds:

i am planning that, and i dont know english so i dont think i dialogue will be a good i dea.. (when i say dont know english i mean its not my language so i my english is pretty lacking)

[Douchey The Douchebag PSA]

This was a pleasant surprise. It actually made me laugh. I hope this is or becomes a series of making fun of PSA's. I think that is had a bit of a slow start but after that it got funny. I think the voice acting really made it a hit though.

[Renegade eps 1]

I like. Plenty of action, violence and 80's rock. Lets see where this series goes. I think a good track for this series would be Wanted Man by Ratt.

[Bumblebee]

While this is really cute and well drawn I'm going to say that this is not ready for newgrounds. I heard no sound and I didn't see much of a plot or joke. I hope to see an improvement soon.

[When Peeing]

Haha everyone with a cock can relate to this XD

[Short Stickfight]

I'm not a very big fan of stick fights but I gotta hand it to you. This was well choreographed and the end was funny.

KodexAnimations responds:

thanks

[Drugs, drugs, drugs!]

I have seen homeless ppl do that lol.

I have to say this flash is too funny, I think the voices were hilarious. Especially the homeless guy because he sounds just like the homeless crazies on the bus (gotta love city life huh?) Its even more funny because if the fact that if this were the PSA in real life it might actually keep kids from doing drugs. If kids only new lol.

BillyNapalm responds:

Damn kids and their music. Glad you enjoyed it!

[Turd Eating Cat]

I can has turdz?

Its kinda trippy and almost like some kinda drug trip with a turd-burgling cat and a monkey. I liked all the different animations that looked like MS dos. I honestly think that this should have been a game since I looks so much like one.